I uploaded the abstract and the thesis’ requirements. I would want to mention that 60 pages will be for the thesis itself and 2 pages. The previous writer was and it will be good to continue with him since he’s the one who proposed the thesis’ topic. I got some some feedback from my school and I was advised to improve the below:
To be improved : Good research questions, develop hypotheses.
Therefore, those two areas must be revised. I would want to be in touch with the writer as many frequently as possible.